Minor update

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@@ -54,10 +54,9 @@ Java 5 we are remove this feature. The deprecation section below covers one part
 we are on Java 6, where the last remaining parts of the JDK appear to have embraced the new cause API. </p>
 <p>JVMRandom - This class was introduced in Lang 2.0 to support a Random object built around the system seed. This 
 proved to be both an uncommon use case and one with bugs and so was dropped. </p>
-<p>StringEscapeUtils.escapeSql - This was a misleading method, only handling the simplest of possible SQL cases. As SQL is not 
-Lang's focus, it didn't make sense to improve this method. </p>
+<p>StringEscapeUtils.escapeSql - This was a misleading method, only handling the simplest of possible SQL cases. As SQL is not Lang's focus, it didn't make sense to maintain this method. </p>
 <p>Various Exception classes were removed - the lesson in defining more semantically relevant exception classes is that you can keep on coming up with more and more new classes. Simpler to focus on using the main JDK classes. </p>
-<p>The various Range classes in the <code>math</code> package were removed in favour of a new Range class. </p>
+<p>The various Range classes in the <code>math</code> package were removed in favour of a new generic Range class. </p>
 <p>All deprecated fields/methods/classes - with a new major version, all of the previously deprecated parts of the API could finally go away. </p>
 <p>If you feel that something was unfairly taken away, please feel free to contact the list. In many cases the possibility exists to reintroduce code. </p>
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