more improvements to new user welcome PM

config/locales/server.en.yml

@@ -1462,69 +1462,77 @@ en:
 
         ## Reading
 
-        To read more, **just keep scrolling down!** As new posts or new topics arrive, they will appear automatically – no need to refresh the page.
+        To read more, **just keep scrolling down!**
+
+        As new replies or new topics arrive, they will appear automatically – no need to refresh the page.
 
         ## Navigation
 
         - For search, your user page, or the <kbd>☰</kbd> menu, use the **icon buttons at upper right**.
 
-        - Selecting a topic title will always take you to the next unread post in the topic. To enter at the top or bottom instead, select the date or post count instead.
+        - Selecting a topic title will always take you to the next unread post in the topic. To enter at the top or bottom, select the date or post count instead.
 
             <img src="/images/welcome/topic-list-select-areas.png" width="593" height="59">
 
-        - While reading a topic, jump to the top &uarr; by selecting the topic title. Select the progress bar at the bottom right for full navigation controls, or use the <kbd>home</kbd> and <kbd>end</kbd> keys.
+        - While reading a topic, jump back to the top by selecting the topic title, select the progress bar at the bottom right for full navigation controls, or use the <kbd>home</kbd> and <kbd>end</kbd> keys.
 
             <img src="/images/welcome/progress-bar.png" width="153" height="181">
 
         ## Replying
 
-        - to the **topic in general**, use Reply <img src="/images/welcome/reply-topic.png" width="29" height="25">  at the very bottom of the topic.
+        - to the **topic in general**, use Reply <img src="/images/welcome/reply-topic.png" width="25" height="23">  at the very bottom of the topic.
 
-        - to a **specific person**, use Reply <img src="/images/welcome/reply-post.png" width="29" height="25"> on their post.
+        - to a **specific person**, use Reply <img src="/images/welcome/reply-post.png" width="25" height="23"> on their post.
 
-        - with **a linked topic**, use <img src="/images/welcome/reply-as-linked-topic.png" width="15" height="25"> Reply as linked Topic to the right of the post.
+        - with **a linked topic**, use <img src="/images/welcome/reply-as-linked-topic.png" width="20" height="25"> Reply as linked Topic to the right of the post.
 
         To insert a quote, simply select the text you wish to quote, then press any Reply button.
 
-        <img src="/images/welcome/quote-reply.png" width="350" height="129">
+        <img src="/images/welcome/quote-reply.png" width="326" height="128">
 
         To notify someone in your reply, mention their name. Type `@` to begin selecting a name.
 
-        <img src="/images/welcome/username-completion.png" width="230" height="131">
+        <img src="/images/welcome/username-completion.png" width="191" height="125">
 
-        To use [standard Emoji](http://www.emoji.codes/), just type `:` or the traditional smileys `:)` :smile:
+        To use [standard Emoji](http://www.emoji.codes/), just type `:` or the traditional smileys `:)`
+
+        <img src="/images/welcome/emoji-completion.png" width="144" height="153">
 
         ## Actions
 
         There are action buttons at the bottom of each post.
 
-        <img src="/images/welcome/like-link-flag-bookmark.png" width="169" height="46">
+        <img src="/images/welcome/like-link-flag-bookmark.png" width="162" height="42">
 
-        To let someone know that you enjoyed their post, use the **like** button. If you see a problem with a post, privately let them, or our staff, know about it with the **flag** button.
+        To let someone know that you enjoyed their post, use the **like** button.
 
-        You can also **share** a link to a post, or **bookmark** it for later reference on your user page.
+        If you see a problem with a post, privately let them, or our staff, know about it with the **flag** button. You can also **share** a link to a post, or **bookmark** it for later reference on your user page.
 
         ## Notifications
 
-        When someone replies to your post, quotes your post, or mentions your `@username`, a number will immediately appear at the top right of the page. Use it access your **notifications**.
+        When someone replies to you, quotes your post, or mentions your `@username`, a number will immediately appear at the top right of the page. Use it to access your **notifications**.
 
-        <img src="/images/welcome/notification-panel.png" width="178" height="59">
+        <img src="/images/welcome/notification-panel.png" width="160" height="54">
 
-        Don't worry about missing a reply – you'll be emailed notifications that arrive when you are away.
+        Don't worry about missing a reply – you'll be emailed any notifications that arrive when you are away.
 
         ## Your Preferences
 
-        By default all conversations less than two days old are considered new, and any conversation you've actively participated in (by replying, creating the topic, or reading for an extended period) will automatically be tracked.
+        By default:
 
-        You will see the blue new and number indicators next to these topics:
+          - all topics less than two days old are considered new
 
-        <img src="/images/welcome/topics-new-unread.png" width="368" height="89">
+          - any topic you've actively participated in (by creating it, replying, or reading for an extended period) will automatically be tracked.
+
+        You will see the blue new and unread number indicators next to these topics.
+
+        <img src="/images/welcome/topics-new-unread.png" width="341" height="106">
 
         You can change the individual notification state of a topic via the notification control at the bottom of the topic. You can also set notification state per category.
 
         <img src="/images/welcome/topic-notification-control.png" width="608" height="312">
 
-        To change these settings, see [your user preferences](%{base_url}/my/preferences).
+        To change any of these settings, see [your user preferences](%{base_url}/my/preferences).
 
         ## Community Trust