From 38e4408131adc69a15ebbdd4cc9b3d253d0cdff8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Sergey Biryukov <sergeybiryukov.ru@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 2 May 2018 03:02:25 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Privacy: fix and improve the help text about adding a privacy
 policy page.

Props idea15, xkon.
Merges [43053] to the 4.9 branch.
See #43435.
Built from https://develop.svn.wordpress.org/branches/4.9@43103


git-svn-id: http://core.svn.wordpress.org/branches/4.9@42932 1a063a9b-81f0-0310-95a4-ce76da25c4cd
---
 wp-admin/privacy.php    | 11 ++++++-----
 wp-includes/version.php |  2 +-
 2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/wp-admin/privacy.php b/wp-admin/privacy.php
index 822973d3e2..c5e9d8dc77 100644
--- a/wp-admin/privacy.php
+++ b/wp-admin/privacy.php
@@ -123,13 +123,14 @@ require_once( ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-header.php' );
 	<p>
 		<?php _e( 'The first step towards privacy laws compliance is to have a comprehensive Privacy Policy.' ); ?>
 		<?php _e( 'If you already have a Privacy Policy page, please select it below. If not, create one.' ); ?>
-		<?php _e( 'The new policy will include the suggested privacy text.' ); ?>
 	</p>
 	<p>
-		<?php _e( 'After your Privacy Policy page is set, we suggest that you edit it.' ); ?>
-		<?php _e( 'On the edit page screen you will find additional privacy information added by your plugins.' ); ?>
-		<?php _e( 'We would also suggest reviewing your privacy policy from time to time, after a WordPress or a plugin update.' ); ?>
-		<?php _e( 'There may be changes or new suggested information for you to consider adding to your policy.' ); ?>
+		<?php _e( 'The new page will include help and suggestions for your privacy policy.' ); ?>
+		<?php _e( 'However, it is your responsibility to use those resources correctly, to provide the information that your privacy policy requires, and to keep that information current and accurate.' ); ?>
+	</p>
+	<p>
+		<?php _e( 'After your Privacy Policy page is set, we suggest that you edit it. On the edit page screen you will find additional privacy information added by your themes and plugins.' ); ?>
+		<?php _e( 'We would also suggest reviewing your privacy policy from time to time, especially after an update. There may be changes or new suggested information for you to consider adding to your policy.' ); ?>
 	</p>
 	<?php
 	if ( $privacy_policy_page_exists ) {
diff --git a/wp-includes/version.php b/wp-includes/version.php
index a9960e4761..7258cb8e1a 100644
--- a/wp-includes/version.php
+++ b/wp-includes/version.php
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
  *
  * @global string $wp_version
  */
-$wp_version = '4.9.6-alpha-43102';
+$wp_version = '4.9.6-alpha-43103';
 
 /**
  * Holds the WordPress DB revision, increments when changes are made to the WordPress DB schema.