About page: Tweak the privacy policy language, for clarity.

See #40794.


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git-svn-id: http://core.svn.wordpress.org/trunk@41879 1a063a9b-81f0-0310-95a4-ce76da25c4cd

wp-admin/privacy.php

@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ include( ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-header.php' );
 
 <p class="about-description"><?php _e( 'From time to time, your WordPress site may send data to WordPress.org &#8212; including, but not limited to &#8212; the version of WordPress you are using, and a list of installed plugins and themes.' ); ?></p>
 
-<p><?php printf( __( 'This data helps WordPress to protect your site by finding and automatically installing new updates, as well as other general enhancements. The data is also used to calculate statistics, such as those shown on the <a href="%s">WordPress.org stats page</a>.' ), 'https://wordpress.org/about/stats/' ); ?></p>
+<p><?php printf( __( 'This data is used to provide general enhancements to WordPress, which includes helping to protect your site by finding and automatically installing new updates. It is also used to calculate statistics, such as those shown on the <a href="%s">WordPress.org stats page</a>.' ), 'https://wordpress.org/about/stats/' ); ?></p>
 
 <p><?php printf( __( 'We take privacy and transparency very seriously. To learn more about what data we collect, and how we use it, please visit <a href="%s">WordPress.org/about/privacy</a>.' ), 'https://wordpress.org/about/privacy/' ); ?></p>
 

wp-includes/version.php

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
  *
  * @global string $wp_version
  */
-$wp_version = '4.9-beta4-42044';
+$wp_version = '4.9-beta4-42045';
 
 /**
  * Holds the WordPress DB revision, increments when changes are made to the WordPress DB schema.