Minor improvements to translog docs (#28237)

The use of the phrase "translog" vs "transaction log" was inconsistent, and
it was apparently unclear that the translog was stored on every shard copy.

docs/reference/index-modules/translog.asciidoc

@@ -1,41 +1,44 @@
 [[index-modules-translog]]
 == Translog
 
-Changes to Lucene are only persisted to disk during a Lucene commit,
-which is a relatively heavy operation and so cannot be performed after every
-index or delete operation. Changes that happen after one commit and before another
-will be lost in the event of process exit or HW failure.
+Changes to Lucene are only persisted to disk during a Lucene commit, which is a
+relatively expensive operation and so cannot be performed after every index or
+delete operation. Changes that happen after one commit and before another will
+be removed from the index by Lucene in the event of process exit or hardware
+failure.
 
-To prevent this data loss, each shard has a _transaction log_ or write ahead
-log associated with it. Any index or delete operation is written to the
-translog after being processed by the internal Lucene index.
-
-In the event of a crash, recent transactions can be replayed from the
-transaction log when the shard recovers.
+Because Lucene commits are too expensive to perform on every individual change,
+each shard copy also has a _transaction log_ known as its _translog_ associated
+with it. All index and delete operations are written to the translog after
+being processed by the internal Lucene index but before they are acknowledged.
+In the event of a crash, recent transactions that have been acknowledged but
+not yet included in the last Lucene commit can instead be recovered from the
+translog when the shard recovers.
 
 An Elasticsearch flush is the process of performing a Lucene commit and
-starting a new translog. It is done automatically in the background in order
-to make sure the transaction log doesn't grow too large, which would make
+starting a new translog. Flushes are performed automatically in the background
+in order to make sure the translog doesn't grow too large, which would make
 replaying its operations take a considerable amount of time during recovery.
-It is also exposed through an API, though its rarely needed to be performed
-manually.
+The ability to perform a flush manually is also exposed through an API,
+although this is rarely needed.
 
 [float]
 === Translog settings
 
-The data in the transaction log is only persisted to disk when the translog is
+The data in the translog is only persisted to disk when the translog is
 ++fsync++ed and committed.  In the event of hardware failure, any data written
 since the previous translog commit will be lost.
 
-By default, Elasticsearch ++fsync++s and commits the translog every 5 seconds if `index.translog.durability` is set
-to `async` or if set to `request` (default) at the end of every <<docs-index_,index>>, <<docs-delete,delete>>,
-<<docs-update,update>>, or  <<docs-bulk,bulk>> request.  In fact, Elasticsearch
-will only report success of an index, delete, update, or bulk request to the
-client after the transaction log has been successfully ++fsync++ed and committed
-on the primary and on every allocated replica.
+By default, Elasticsearch ++fsync++s and commits the translog every 5 seconds
+if `index.translog.durability` is set to `async` or if set to `request`
+(default) at the end of every <<docs-index_,index>>, <<docs-delete,delete>>,
+<<docs-update,update>>, or  <<docs-bulk,bulk>> request. More precisely, if set
+to `request`, Elasticsearch will only report success of an index, delete,
+update, or bulk request to the client after the translog has been successfully
+++fsync++ed and committed on the primary and on every allocated replica.
 
-The following <<indices-update-settings,dynamically updatable>> per-index settings
-control the behaviour of the transaction log:
+The following <<indices-update-settings,dynamically updatable>> per-index
+settings control the behaviour of the translog:
 
 `index.translog.sync_interval`::
 
@@ -64,17 +67,20 @@ update, or bulk request.  This setting accepts the following parameters:
 
 `index.translog.flush_threshold_size`::
 
-The translog stores all operations that are not yet safely persisted in Lucene (i.e., are
-not part of a lucene commit point). Although these operations are available for reads, they will
-need to be reindexed if the shard was to shutdown and has to be recovered. This settings controls
-the maximum total size of these operations, to prevent recoveries from taking too long. Once the
-maximum size has been reached a flush will happen, generating a new Lucene commit. Defaults to `512mb`.
+The translog stores all operations that are not yet safely persisted in Lucene
+(i.e., are not part of a Lucene commit point). Although these operations are
+available for reads, they will need to be reindexed if the shard was to
+shutdown and has to be recovered. This settings controls the maximum total size
+of these operations, to prevent recoveries from taking too long. Once the
+maximum size has been reached a flush will happen, generating a new Lucene
+commit point. Defaults to `512mb`.
 
 `index.translog.retention.size`::
 
-The total size of translog files to keep. Keeping more translog files increases the chance of performing
-an operation based sync when recovering replicas. If the translog files are not sufficient, replica recovery
-will fall back to a file based sync. Defaults to `512mb`
+The total size of translog files to keep. Keeping more translog files increases
+the chance of performing an operation based sync when recovering replicas. If
+the translog files are not sufficient, replica recovery will fall back to a
+file based sync. Defaults to `512mb`
 
 
 `index.translog.retention.age`::
@@ -86,10 +92,14 @@ The maximum duration for which translog files will be kept. Defaults to `12h`.
 [[corrupt-translog-truncation]]
 === What to do if the translog becomes corrupted?
 
-In some cases (a bad drive, user error) the translog can become corrupted. When
-this corruption is detected by Elasticsearch due to mismatching checksums,
-Elasticsearch will fail the shard and refuse to allocate that copy of the data
-to the node, recovering from a replica if available.
+In some cases (a bad drive, user error) the translog on a shard copy can become
+corrupted. When this corruption is detected by Elasticsearch due to mismatching
+checksums, Elasticsearch will fail that shard copy and refuse to use that copy
+of the data.  If there are other copies of the shard available then
+Elasticsearch will automatically recover from one of them using the normal
+shard allocation and recovery mechanism.  In particular, if the corrupt shard
+copy was the primary when the corruption was detected then one of its replicas
+will be promoted in its place.
 
 If there is no copy of the data from which Elasticsearch can recover
 successfully, a user may want to recover the data that is part of the shard at