Update allocation awareness docs (#29116)

Update allocation awareness docs

Today, the docs imply that if multiple attributes are specified the the
whole combination of values is considered as a single entity when
performing allocation. In fact, each attribute is considered separately. This
change fixes this discrepancy.

It also replaces the use of the term "awareness zone" with "zone or domain", and
reformats some paragraphs to the right width.

Fixes #29105

docs/reference/modules/cluster/allocation_awareness.asciidoc

@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
 === Shard Allocation Awareness
 
 When running nodes on multiple VMs on the same physical server, on multiple
-racks, or across multiple awareness zones, it is more likely that two nodes on
+racks, or across multiple zones or domains, it is more likely that two nodes on
-the same physical server, in the same rack, or in the same awareness zone will
+the same physical server, in the same rack, or in the same zone or domain will
 crash at the same time, rather than two unrelated nodes crashing
 simultaneously.
 
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ attribute called `rack_id` -- we could use any attribute name.  For example:
 ----------------------
 <1> This setting could also be specified in the `elasticsearch.yml` config file.
 
-Now, we need to setup _shard allocation awareness_  by telling Elasticsearch
+Now, we need to set up _shard allocation awareness_  by telling Elasticsearch
 which attributes to use.  This can be configured in the `elasticsearch.yml`
 file on *all* master-eligible nodes, or it can be set (and changed) with the
 <<cluster-update-settings,cluster-update-settings>> API.
@@ -37,51 +37,51 @@ For our example, we'll set the value in the config file:
 cluster.routing.allocation.awareness.attributes: rack_id
 --------------------------------------------------------
 
-With this config in place, let's say we start two nodes with `node.attr.rack_id`
+With this config in place, let's say we start two nodes with
-set to `rack_one`, and we create an index with 5 primary shards and 1 replica
+`node.attr.rack_id` set to `rack_one`, and we create an index with 5 primary
-of each primary.  All primaries and replicas are allocated across the two
+shards and 1 replica of each primary.  All primaries and replicas are
-nodes.
+allocated across the two nodes.
 
 Now, if we start two more nodes with `node.attr.rack_id` set to `rack_two`,
 Elasticsearch will move shards across to the new nodes, ensuring (if possible)
-that no two copies of the same shard will be in the same rack. However if `rack_two`
+that no two copies of the same shard will be in the same rack. However if
-were to fail, taking down both of its nodes, Elasticsearch will still allocate the lost
+`rack_two` were to fail, taking down both of its nodes, Elasticsearch will
-shard copies to nodes in `rack_one`. 
+still allocate the lost shard copies to nodes in `rack_one`. 
 
 .Prefer local shards
 *********************************************
 
 When executing search or GET requests, with shard awareness enabled,
 Elasticsearch will prefer using local shards -- shards in the same awareness
-group -- to execute the request. This is usually faster than crossing racks or
+group -- to execute the request. This is usually faster than crossing between
-awareness zones.
+racks or across zone boundaries.
 
 *********************************************
 
-Multiple awareness attributes can be specified, in which case the combination
+Multiple awareness attributes can be specified, in which case each attribute
-of values from each attribute is considered to be a separate value.
+is considered separately when deciding where to allocate the shards.
 
 [source,yaml]
 -------------------------------------------------------------
 cluster.routing.allocation.awareness.attributes: rack_id,zone
 -------------------------------------------------------------
 
-NOTE: When using awareness attributes, shards will not be allocated to
+NOTE: When using awareness attributes, shards will not be allocated to nodes
-nodes that don't have values set for those attributes.
+that don't have values set for those attributes.
 
-NOTE: Number of primary/replica of a shard allocated on a specific group
+NOTE: Number of primary/replica of a shard allocated on a specific group of
-of nodes with the same awareness attribute value is determined by the number
+nodes with the same awareness attribute value is determined by the number of
-of attribute values. When the number of nodes in groups is unbalanced and
+attribute values. When the number of nodes in groups is unbalanced and there
-there are many replicas, replica shards may be left unassigned.
+are many replicas, replica shards may be left unassigned.
 
 [float]
 [[forced-awareness]]
 === Forced Awareness
 
-Imagine that you have two awareness zones and enough hardware across the two
+Imagine that you have two zones and enough hardware across the two zones to
-zones to host all of your primary and replica shards.  But perhaps the
+host all of your primary and replica shards.  But perhaps the hardware in a
-hardware in a single zone, while sufficient to host half the shards, would be
+single zone, while sufficient to host half the shards, would be unable to host
-unable to host *ALL* the shards.
+*ALL* the shards.
 
 With ordinary awareness, if one zone lost contact with the other zone,
 Elasticsearch would assign all of the missing replica shards to a single zone.
@@ -91,9 +91,9 @@ remaining zone to be overloaded.
 Forced awareness solves this problem by *NEVER* allowing copies of the same
 shard to be allocated to the same zone.
 
-For example, lets say we have an awareness attribute called `zone`, and
+For example, lets say we have an awareness attribute called `zone`, and we
-we know we are going to have two zones, `zone1` and `zone2`. Here is how
+know we are going to have two zones, `zone1` and `zone2`. Here is how we can
-we can force awareness on a node:
+force awareness on a node:
 
 [source,yaml]
 -------------------------------------------------------------------
@@ -102,10 +102,10 @@ cluster.routing.allocation.awareness.attributes: zone
 -------------------------------------------------------------------
 <1> We must list all possible values that the `zone` attribute can have.
 
-Now, if we start 2 nodes with `node.attr.zone` set to `zone1` and create an index
+Now, if we start 2 nodes with `node.attr.zone` set to `zone1` and create an
-with 5 shards and 1 replica. The index will be created, but only the 5 primary
+index with 5 shards and 1 replica. The index will be created, but only the 5
-shards will be allocated (with no replicas). Only when we start more nodes
+primary shards will be allocated (with no replicas). Only when we start more
-with `node.attr.zone` set to `zone2` will the replicas be allocated.
+nodes with `node.attr.zone` set to `zone2` will the replicas be allocated.
 
 The `cluster.routing.allocation.awareness.*` settings can all be updated
 dynamically on a live cluster with the