From b6717c73bdca75e876ed127183ef095a9d1ae456 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kathy Walrath <kathyw@google.com>
Date: Tue, 3 Mar 2015 17:43:26 -0800
Subject: [PATCH] incorporate Rado's review comments

---
 public/docs/dart/latest/quickstart.jade | 22 +++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/public/docs/dart/latest/quickstart.jade b/public/docs/dart/latest/quickstart.jade
index 58a4981f3d..f76fe7c0d9 100644
--- a/public/docs/dart/latest/quickstart.jade
+++ b/public/docs/dart/latest/quickstart.jade
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ p.
 
   p.
     Create a new directory, and put a file named
-    <code>pubspec.yaml</code> file in it.
+    <code>pubspec.yaml</code> in it.
 
   pre.prettyprint
     code.
@@ -49,8 +49,8 @@ p.
 
   p.
     <b>Note:</b>
-    If you're using Dart 1.9, then your version of angular2
-    will be higher than alpha 6.
+    If you're using Dart's Dev channel, then your version of angular2
+    will be higher than alpha 6. That's fine.
 
   // PENDING: Update once 1.9 is on stable channel.
   // TODO: Convert the above to a callout.
@@ -108,25 +108,25 @@ p.
   // [PENDING: add line numbers once we can specify where they start]
 
   p.
-    The code you just added creates a component—a custom element—that
+    The code you just added creates a component that
     has the tag <b>&lt;my-app></b>.
     The Dart code for an Angular component consists of a class
     (the <b>component controller</b>)
     that has <code>@Component</code> and <code>@Template</code> annotations.
 
-  // PENDING: Is that correct???
-
 
   .l-sub-section
     h3 Annotations
 
     p.
-      The <code>@Component</code> annotation defines the HTML tag for the component (the <code>selector</code> value).
+      The <code>@Component</code> annotation defines
+      the HTML tag for the component by specifying the component's CSS selector.
 
     p.
-      The <code>@Template</code> annotation defines the HTML to apply to the
-      component. This component uses an inline template, but you can also have
-      an external template. To use an external template, specify a <code>url</code> property
+      The <code>@Template</code> annotation defines the HTML that
+      represents the component. This component uses an inline template,
+      but you can also have an external template. To use an external template,
+      specify a <code>url</code> property
       and give it the path to the HTML file.
 
     pre.prettyprint
@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ p.
   p.
     This code adds a <code>main()</code> function
     that calls Angular's <code>bootstrap()</code> function.
-    The argument to <code>bootstrap()</code> is the name of the app class
+    The argument to <code>bootstrap()</code> is the name of the component class
     you defined above.
 
   p.