diff --git a/aio/content/guide/pipes.md b/aio/content/guide/pipes.md index ea75011793..b24c049a0d 100644 --- a/aio/content/guide/pipes.md +++ b/aio/content/guide/pipes.md @@ -340,11 +340,11 @@ code with checkbox switches and additional displays to help you experience these Replacing the array is an efficient way to signal Angular to update the display. -When do you replace the array? When the data change. +When do you replace the array? When the data changes. That's an easy rule to follow in *this* example where the only way to change the data is by adding a hero. -More often, you don't know when the data have changed, +More often, you don't know when the data has changed, especially in applications that mutate data in many ways, perhaps in application locations far away. A component in such an application usually can't know about those changes. @@ -495,7 +495,7 @@ Write one more impure pipe, a pipe that makes an HTTP request. Remember that impure pipes are called every few milliseconds. If you're not careful, this pipe will punish the server with requests. -In the following code, the pipe only calls the server when the request URL changes and it caches the server response. +In the following code, the pipe only calls the server when the requested URL changes and it caches the server response. The code uses the [Angular http](guide/http) client to retrieve data: