docs: edit getting started start-forms.md (#39681)

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aio/content/examples/getting-started/src/app/cart/cart.component.1.ts

@@ -1,15 +1,12 @@
-import { Component, OnInit } from '@angular/core';
+import { Component } from '@angular/core';
 
 @Component({
   selector: 'app-cart',
   templateUrl: './cart.component.html',
   styleUrls: ['./cart.component.css']
 })
-export class CartComponent implements OnInit {
+export class CartComponent {
 
   constructor() { }
 
-  ngOnInit() {
-  }
-
 }

aio/content/examples/getting-started/src/app/cart/cart.component.2.ts

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ import { CartService } from '../cart.service';
 // #docregion inject-cart, items, submit
 export class CartComponent {
 // #enddocregion inject-cart
-  items;
+  items = this.cartService.getItems();
 // #docregion inject-cart
 
   constructor(

aio/content/examples/getting-started/src/app/cart/cart.component.3.ts

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ export class CartComponent implements OnInit {
     private cartService: CartService
   ) { }
 
-  ngOnInit() {
+  ngOnInit(): void  {
     this.items = this.cartService.getItems();
   }
 }

aio/content/examples/getting-started/src/app/cart/cart.component.html

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
 </div>
 
 <!-- #docregion checkout-form-1 -->
-<form [formGroup]="checkoutForm" (ngSubmit)="onSubmit(checkoutForm.value)">
+<form [formGroup]="checkoutForm" (ngSubmit)="onSubmit()">
 <!-- #enddocregion checkout-form-1 -->
 
   <div>

aio/content/examples/getting-started/src/app/cart/cart.component.ts

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 // #docplaster
 // #docregion imports
-import { Component, OnInit } from '@angular/core';
+import { Component } from '@angular/core';
 import { FormBuilder } from '@angular/forms';
 
 import { CartService } from '../cart.service';
@@ -12,37 +12,27 @@ import { CartService } from '../cart.service';
   styleUrls: ['./cart.component.css']
 })
 // #docregion props-services, submit, inject-form-builder, checkout-form, checkout-form-group
-export class CartComponent implements OnInit {
+export class CartComponent {
-  items;
   // #enddocregion inject-form-builder
-  checkoutForm;
+  items = this.cartService.getItems();
-// #enddocregion checkout-form
+  checkoutForm = this.formBuilder.group({
-// #docregion inject-form-builder
-
-  constructor(
-    private cartService: CartService,
-    private formBuilder: FormBuilder,
-  ) {
-// #enddocregion inject-form-builder
-    this.checkoutForm = this.formBuilder.group({
     name: '',
     address: ''
   });
+// #enddocregion checkout-form
 // #docregion inject-form-builder
-  }
+  constructor(
-
+    private cartService: CartService,
-  ngOnInit() {
+    private formBuilder: FormBuilder,
-    this.items = this.cartService.getItems();
+    ) {}
-  }
 // #enddocregion inject-form-builder, checkout-form-group
 
   // #enddocregion props-services
-  onSubmit(customerData) {
+  onSubmit(): void {
     // Process checkout data here
     this.items = this.cartService.clearCart();
+    console.warn('Your order has been submitted', this.checkoutForm.value);
     this.checkoutForm.reset();
-
-    console.warn('Your order has been submitted', customerData);
   }
 // #docregion props-services, inject-form-builder, checkout-form, checkout-form-group
 }

aio/content/examples/getting-started/src/app/shipping/shipping.component.1.ts

@@ -1,15 +1,12 @@
-import { Component, OnInit } from '@angular/core';
+import { Component } from '@angular/core';
 
 @Component({
   selector: 'app-shipping',
   templateUrl: './shipping.component.html',
   styleUrls: ['./shipping.component.css']
 })
-export class ShippingComponent implements OnInit {
+export class ShippingComponent {
 
   constructor() { }
 
-  ngOnInit() {
-  }
-
 }

aio/content/examples/getting-started/src/app/shipping/shipping.component.ts

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 // #docplaster
 // #docregion imports
-import { Component, OnInit } from '@angular/core';
+import { Component } from '@angular/core';
 
 import { CartService } from '../cart.service';
 // #enddocregion
@@ -11,20 +11,17 @@ import { CartService } from '../cart.service';
   styleUrls: ['./shipping.component.css']
 })
 // #docregion props, ctor
-export class ShippingComponent implements OnInit {
+export class ShippingComponent {
-  shippingCosts;
+  shippingCosts = this.cartService.getShippingPrices();
 // #enddocregion props
 
+
+
 // #docregion inject-cart-service
-  constructor(
+  constructor(private cartService: CartService) {
-    private cartService: CartService
-  ) {
   }
 // #enddocregion inject-cart-service
 
-  ngOnInit() {
-    this.shippingCosts = this.cartService.getShippingPrices();
-  }
 
 // #docregion props
 }

aio/content/start/start-data.md

@@ -106,6 +106,8 @@ For customers to see their cart, you can create the cart view in two steps:
 
     <code-example header="src/app/cart/cart.component.ts" path="getting-started/src/app/cart/cart.component.1.ts"></code-example>
 
+    StackBlitz also generates an `ngOnInit()` by default in components.  You can ignore the `CartComponent` `ngOnInit()` for this tutorial.
+
 1. Open `app.module.ts` and add a route for the component `CartComponent`, with a `path` of `cart`.
 
     <code-example header="src/app/app.module.ts" path="getting-started/src/app/app.module.ts" region="cart-route">
@@ -144,13 +146,8 @@ This section shows you how to use the cart service to display the products in th
     <code-example path="getting-started/src/app/cart/cart.component.2.ts" header="src/app/cart/cart.component.ts" region="items">
     </code-example>
 
-1. Set the items using the `CartService` `getItems()` method.
+    This code sets the items using the `CartService` `getItems()` method.
     You defined this method [when you created `cart.service.ts`](#generate-cart-service).
-    By using the `getItems()` method in Angular's `ngOnInit()`, Angular uses `getItems()` upon initialization of `CartComponent`.
-    The resulting `CartComponent` class is as follows.
-
-    <code-example path="getting-started/src/app/cart/cart.component.3.ts" header="src/app/cart/cart.component.ts" region="props-services">
-    </code-example>
 
 1. Update the cart template with a header, and use a `<div>` with an `*ngFor` to display each of the cart items with its name and price.
     The resulting `CartComponent` template is as follows.
@@ -251,17 +248,13 @@ This section guides you through modifying the `ShippingComponent` to retrieve sh
 
     <code-example header="src/app/shipping/shipping.component.ts" path="getting-started/src/app/shipping/shipping.component.ts" region="imports"></code-example>
 
-1. Define a `shippingCosts` property.
-
-    <code-example path="getting-started/src/app/shipping/shipping.component.ts" header="src/app/shipping/shipping.component.ts" region="props"></code-example>
-
 1. Inject the cart service in the `ShippingComponent` `constructor()`.
 
     <code-example path="getting-started/src/app/shipping/shipping.component.ts" header="src/app/shipping/shipping.component.ts" region="inject-cart-service"></code-example>
 
-1. Set the `shippingCosts` property using the `getShippingPrices()` method from the `CartService`.
+1. Define a `shippingCosts` property that sets the `shippingCosts` property using the `getShippingPrices()` method from the `CartService`.
 
-    <code-example path="getting-started/src/app/shipping/shipping.component.ts" header="src/app/shipping/shipping.component.ts" region="ctor"></code-example>
+    <code-example path="getting-started/src/app/shipping/shipping.component.ts" header="src/app/shipping/shipping.component.ts" region="props"></code-example>
 
 1. Update the `ShippingComponent` template to display the shipping types and prices using the `async` pipe.
 

aio/content/start/start-forms.md

@@ -1,61 +1,48 @@
 # Using forms for user input
 
-At the end of [Managing Data](start/start-data "Try it: Managing Data"), the online store application has a product catalog and a shopping cart.
+This guide builds on the [Managing Data](start/start-data "Try it: Managing Data") step of the Getting Started tutorial, [Get started with a basic Angular app](start "Get started with a basic Angular app").
 
 This section walks you through adding a form-based checkout feature to collect user information as part of checkout.
 
-## Forms in Angular
-
-Forms in Angular build upon the standard HTML forms to help you create custom form controls and easy validation experiences. There are two parts to an Angular Reactive form: the objects that live in the component to store and manage the form, and the visualization of the form that lives in the template.
-
 ## Define the checkout form model
 
-First, set up the checkout form model. Defined in the component class, the form model is the source of truth for the status of the form.
+This step shows you how to set up the checkout form model in the component class.
+The form model determines the status of the form.
 
 1. Open `cart.component.ts`.
 
-1. Angular's `FormBuilder` service provides convenient methods for generating controls. As with the other services you've used, you need to import and inject the service before you can use it:
-
 1. Import the `FormBuilder` service from the `@angular/forms` package.
+  This service provides convenient methods for generating controls.
 
   <code-example header="src/app/cart/cart.component.ts" path="getting-started/src/app/cart/cart.component.ts" region="imports">
   </code-example>
 
-      The `ReactiveFormsModule` provides the `FormBuilder` service, which `AppModule` (in `app.module.ts`) already imports.
+1. Inject the `FormBuilder` service in the `CartComponent` `constructor()`.
-
+  This service is part of the `ReactiveFormsModule` module, which you've already imported.
-    1. Inject the `FormBuilder` service.
 
   <code-example header="src/app/cart/cart.component.ts" path="getting-started/src/app/cart/cart.component.ts" region="inject-form-builder">
   </code-example>
 
-1. Still in the `CartComponent` class, define the `checkoutForm` property to store the form model.
+1. To gather the user's name and address, use the `FormBuilder` `group()` method to set the `checkoutForm` property to a form model containing `name` and `address` fields.
-
-    <code-example header="src/app/cart/cart.component.ts" path="getting-started/src/app/cart/cart.component.ts" region="checkout-form">
-    </code-example>
-
-1. To gather the user's name and address, set the `checkoutForm` property with a form model containing `name` and `address` fields, using the `FormBuilder` `group()` method. Add this between the curly braces, `{}`,
-of the constructor.
 
   <code-example header="src/app/cart/cart.component.ts" path="getting-started/src/app/cart/cart.component.ts" region="checkout-form-group"></code-example>
 
-1. For the checkout process, users need to submit their name and address. When they submit their order, the form should reset and the cart should clear.
+1. Define an `onSubmit()` method to process the form.
+  This method allows users to submit their name and address.
+  In addition, this method uses the `clearCart()` method of the `CartService` to reset the form and clear the cart.
 
-    1. In `cart.component.ts`, define an `onSubmit()` method to process the form. Use the `CartService` `clearCart()` method to empty the cart items and reset the form after its submission. In a real-world app, this method would also submit the data to an external server. The entire cart component class is as follows:
+  The entire cart component class is as follows:
 
   <code-example header="src/app/cart/cart.component.ts" path="getting-started/src/app/cart/cart.component.ts">
   </code-example>
 
-Now that you've defined the form model in the component class, you need a checkout form to reflect the model in the view.
-
 ## Create the checkout form
 
-Use the following steps to add a checkout form at the bottom of the "Cart" view.
+Use the following steps to add a checkout form at the bottom of the Cart view.
 
-1. Open `cart.component.html`.
+1. At the bottom of `cart.component.html`, add an HTML `<form>` element and a **Purchase** button.
 
-1. At the bottom of the template, add an HTML form to capture user information.
+1. Use a `formGroup` property binding to bind `checkoutForm` to the HTML `<form>`.
-
-1. Use a `formGroup` property binding to bind the `checkoutForm` to the `form` tag in the template. Also include a "Purchase" button to submit the form.
 
   <code-example header="src/app/cart/cart.component.html" path="getting-started/src/app/cart/cart.component.3.html" region="checkout-form">
   </code-example>
@@ -65,21 +52,24 @@ Use the following steps to add a checkout form at the bottom of the "Cart" view.
   <code-example path="getting-started/src/app/cart/cart.component.html" header="src/app/cart/cart.component.html (cart component template detail)" region="checkout-form-1">
   </code-example>
 
-1. Add input fields for `name` and `address`.  Use the `formControlName` attribute binding to bind the `checkoutForm` form controls for `name` and `address` to their input fields. The final complete component is as follows:
+1. Add `<input>` fields for `name` and `address`, each with a `formControlName` attribute that binds to the `checkoutForm` form controls for `name` and `address` to their `<input>` fields.
+  The complete component is as follows:
 
   <code-example path="getting-started/src/app/cart/cart.component.html" header="src/app/cart/cart.component.html" region="checkout-form-2">
   </code-example>
 
-After putting a few items in the cart, users can now review their items, enter their name and address, and submit their purchase:
+After putting a few items in the cart, users can review their items, enter their name and address, and submit their purchase.
 
 <div class="lightbox">
   <img src='generated/images/guide/start/cart-with-items-and-form.png' alt="Cart view with checkout form">
 </div>
 
-To confirm submission, open the console where you should see an object containing the name and address you submitted.
+To confirm submission, open the console to see an object containing the name and address you submitted.
 
-## Next steps
+<hr />
 
-Congratulations! You have a complete online store application with a product catalog, a shopping cart, and a checkout function.
+## What's next
+
+You have a complete online store application with a product catalog, a shopping cart, and a checkout function.
 
 [Continue to the "Deployment" section](start/start-deployment "Try it: Deployment") to move to local development, or deploy your app to Firebase or your own server.