From 4e3da3ef54467a7a3175ba4954c44f0a393da620 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Arve Knudsen Date: Sat, 20 Feb 2016 09:55:22 -0600 Subject: [PATCH] Improve language --- .../source/intro/getting-started/build-image.html.md | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/website/source/intro/getting-started/build-image.html.md b/website/source/intro/getting-started/build-image.html.md index b6c8a5ebf..adab18b46 100644 --- a/website/source/intro/getting-started/build-image.html.md +++ b/website/source/intro/getting-started/build-image.html.md @@ -65,8 +65,8 @@ briefly. Create a file `example.json` and fill it with the following contents: } ``` -When building, you'll pass in the `aws_access_key` and `aws_secret_key` as a -[user variable](/docs/templates/user-variables.html), keeping your secret keys +When building, you'll pass in `aws_access_key` and `aws_secret_key` as +[user variables](/docs/templates/user-variables.html), keeping your secret keys out of the template. You can create security credentials on [this page](https://console.aws.amazon.com/iam/home?#security_credential). An example IAM policy document can be found in the [Amazon EC2 builder @@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ EBS-backed AMI by launching a source AMI, provisioning on top of that, and re-packaging it into a new AMI. The additional keys within the object are configuration for this builder, -specifying things such as access keys, the source AMI to build from, and more. +specifying things such as access keys, the source AMI to build from and more. The exact set of configuration variables available for a builder are specific to each builder and can be found within the [documentation](/docs). @@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ typically represent an ID (such as in the case of an AMI) or a set of files (such as for a VMware virtual machine). In this example, we only have a single artifact: the AMI in us-east-1 that was created. -This AMI is ready to use. If you wanted you can go and launch this AMI right now +This AMI is ready to use. If you wanted you could go and launch this AMI right now and it would work great. -> **Note:** Your AMI ID will surely be different than the one above. If you @@ -176,5 +176,5 @@ page](https://console.aws.amazon.com/ec2/home?region=us-east-1#s=Snapshots). Congratulations! You've just built your first image with Packer. Although the image was pretty useless in this case (nothing was changed about it), this page -should've given you a general idea of how Packer works, what templates are, and +should've given you a general idea of how Packer works, what templates are and how to validate and build templates into machine images.