diff --git a/pep-0101.txt b/pep-0101.txt
index aeeb73ebb..e2a4aa0ac 100644
--- a/pep-0101.txt
+++ b/pep-0101.txt
@@ -147,6 +147,15 @@ How to Make A Release
       verify with Tim Peters about changes on Windows, and Jack Jansen
       about changes on the Mac.
 
+      This command should help you:
+
+      % cvs log -rr22a2: | python Tools/scripts/logmerge.py > /tmp/news.txt
+
+      You can then troll through the news.txt file looking for
+      interesting things to add to NEWS.
+
+  ___ Check your NEWS changes into the branch and into the trunk.
+
   ___ Once the branch is frozen, Fred Drake needs to create the HTML
       from the documentation.  He does this and uploads the file to
       www.python.org.  Then he tells Tim Peters where this file is.
@@ -163,7 +172,8 @@ How to Make A Release
 
   ___ Tim Peters grabs the HTML and uses this to build the Windows
       installer.  Tim then creates a new "release" named X.YaZ on the
-      SourceForge file release manager.
+      SourceForge file release manager.  (Although, if you get there
+      first, you should create the new release.)
 
       (Diversion: SF's file manager has "packages" and "releases".  We
       use packages to name major upcoming releases, e.g. python-2.2 or
@@ -452,10 +462,8 @@ How to Make A Release
 
     ___ Run a diff against your branch by doing this in the common
         parent directory containing both python-clean and python-XYaZ:
-        % diff -r python-clean python-22a2 | grep ^diff | grep -v CVS
-
-    ___ Take the output of this and stick it in a file,
-        e.g. /tmp/diffcmd.sh
+        % diff -r python-clean python-22a2 | grep ^diff | grep -v CVS \
+            > /tmp/diffcmd.sh
 
     ___ Edit diffcmd.sh to get rid of files that you know don't have
         important changes.  You're looking for files that have updates