From bcf9c4ac0f35b96f07b6a4b5bd549bddc3d54dcd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Brett Cannon <bcannon@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 3 Oct 2007 19:59:57 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Fix/clarify stuff based on suggestions from Mark Summerfield.

---
 pep-0352.txt | 16 ++++++----------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/pep-0352.txt b/pep-0352.txt
index 91b282aa1..a1decaf05 100644
--- a/pep-0352.txt
+++ b/pep-0352.txt
@@ -67,12 +67,9 @@ work in Python 2.x is covered in the `Transition Plan`_ section)::
       """
 
       def __init__(self, *args):
-          """Set the 'args' attribute'"""
           self.args = args
 
       def __str__(self):
-          """Return the str of
-          ``args[0] if len(args) == 1 else args``."""
           if len(self.args) == 1:
               return str(self.args[0])
           else:
@@ -137,7 +134,7 @@ interpreter should exit will not be caught and thus be allowed to
 propagate up and allow the interpreter to terminate.
 
 KeyboardInterrupt has been moved since users typically expect an
-application to exit when the press the interrupt key (usually Ctrl-C).
+application to exit when they press the interrupt key (usually Ctrl-C).
 If people have overly broad ``except`` clauses the expected behaviour
 does not occur.
 
@@ -176,11 +173,9 @@ Here is BaseException as implemented in the 2.x series::
       """
 
       def __init__(self, *args):
-          """Set the 'args' attribute."""
           self.args = args
 
       def __str__(self):
-          """Return the str of args[0] or args, depending on length."""
           return str(self.args[0]
                      if len(self.args) <= 1
                      else self.args)
@@ -204,9 +199,10 @@ Here is BaseException as implemented in the 2.x series::
                           "since Python 2.6")
           return self.args[0] if len(args) == 1 else ''
 
-      message = property(_get_message)
-
-
+      message = property(_get_message,
+                          doc="access the 'message' attribute; "
+                              "deprecated and provided only for "
+                              "backwards-compatibility")
 
 
 Deprecation of features in Python 2.9 is optional.  This is because it
@@ -216,7 +212,7 @@ will not be in 3.0 .  It is conceivable that no deprecation warnings
 will be used in 2.9 since there could be such a difference between 2.9
 and 3.0 that it would make 2.9 too "noisy" in terms of warnings.  Thus
 the proposed deprecation warnings for Python 2.9 will be revisited
-when development of that version begins to determine if they are still
+when development of that version begins, to determine if they are still
 desired.
 
 * Python 2.5 [done]