update from Richard Jones

pep-0301.txt

@@ -108,17 +108,17 @@ The web interface implements the following commands/interfaces:
   update will update all information about the package based on the
   new submitted information.
 
-  There will also be a submit/edit form that will allow manual submission
+  There will also be a submit/edit form that will allow manual
-  and updating for those who do not use Distutils.
+  submission and updating for those who do not use Distutils.
 
 **submit_pkg_info**
   Accepts a POST submission of a PKG-INFO file and performs the same
   function as the **submit** interface.
 
 **user**
-  Registers a new user with the index.  Requires username, password and
+  Registers a new user with the index.  Requires username, password
-  email address.  Passwords will be stored in the index database as SHA
+  and email address.  Passwords will be stored in the index database
-  hashes.  If the username already exists in the database:
+  as SHA hashes.  If the username already exists in the database:
 
   1. If valid HTTP Basic authentication is provided, the password and
      email address are updated with the submission information, or
@@ -195,9 +195,9 @@ The index is stored in a set of relational database tables:
   ID.
 
 **release_discriminators**
-  Each entry maps a package (*name*, *version*) to a *discriminator_id*.
+  Each entry maps a package (*name*, *version*) to a
-  We map to releases instead of packages because the set of 
+  *discriminator_id*.  We map to releases instead of packages because
-  discriminators may change between releases.
+  the set of discriminators may change between releases.
 
 **journals**
   Holds information about changes to package information in the
@@ -233,8 +233,8 @@ will be prompted at exit to save their username/password to a file
 in their ``$HOME`` directory in the file ``.pypirc``.
 
 Notification of changes to a package entry will be sent to all users
-who have submitted information about the package.  That is, the original
+who have submitted information about the package.  That is, the
-submitter and any subsequent updaters.
+original submitter and any subsequent updaters.
 
 The *register* command will include a ``--verify`` option which
 performs a test submission to the index without actually committing
@@ -288,14 +288,14 @@ limitation.
 The list of classification values on the module index has been merged
 from FreshMeat and SourceForge (with their permission).  This list
 will be made available both through the web interface and through the
-*regsiter* command's ``--list-classifiers`` option as a text list
+*register* command's ``--list-classifiers`` option as a text list
 which may then be copied to the ``setup.py`` file.  The *register*
 command's ``--verify`` option will check classifiers values against
 the server's list.
 
 Unfortunately, the addition of the "classifiers" property is not
 backwards-compatible.  A setup.py file using it will not work under
-Python 2.1.3.  It is hoped that a bugfix release of Python 2.2 (most
+Python 2.1.3.  It is hoped that a bug-fix release of Python 2.2 (most
 likely 2.2.3) will relax the argument checking of the setup() command
 to allow new keywords, even if they're not actually used.  It is
 preferable that a warning be produced, rather than a show-stopping
@@ -316,35 +316,18 @@ In the PKG-INFO, the classifiers list items will appear as individual
         Url: http://sourceforge.net/projects/roundup/
 
 
-Reference Implementation
+Implementation
-========================
+==============
 
-Reference code is available from the SourceForge project:
+The server is be available at:
+
+  http://www.python.org/pypi
+
+The code is available from the SourceForge project:
 
   http://sourceforge.net/projects/pypi/
 
-A demonstration will be available at:
+The *register* command has been integrated into Python 2.3.
-
-  http://www.amk.ca/cgi-bin/pypi.cgi
-
-===== =============================================================
-Done  Feature
-===== =============================================================
- Y    Submission via *register* command (register.py module)
- Y    Web interface
- Y    Handling of the *classifiers* setup() keyword (dist.py.patch)
- Y    Patch Python 2.2.3 to relax keyword argument checks in the
-      distutils setup() function
- N    Patch Python 2.3 to apply the dist.py.patch
- N    Library reference documentation of the *register* command and
-      additional *classifiers* keyword
-===== =============================================================
-
-In the two days of the 22nd and 23rd October 2002, after the first
-announcement to the Catalog-SIG (22nd) and Distutils-SIG (23rd), the
-initial prototype had 45 visitors (not including myself), two of whom
-used the *register* command to submit package information.
-
 
 
 Rejected Proposals
@@ -360,7 +343,8 @@ PEP 243):
   A description of the reason for failure, or additional information
   in the case of a success.
 
-However, it has been pointed out [8]_ that this is a bad scheme to use.
+However, it has been pointed out [8]_ that this is a bad scheme to
+use.
 
 
 References