diff --git a/pep-8001.rst b/pep-8001.rst
index fda49feed..37b957a0b 100644
--- a/pep-8001.rst
+++ b/pep-8001.rst
@@ -244,9 +244,9 @@ they would win against the other options in a 1-on-1 race, there is a
 possibility that PEP A > PEP B > PEP C > PEP A (or in terms of the game
 rock-paper-scissors, imagine a three-player game where someone played rock,
 another played paper, and the last person played scissors; no one wins that
-game as everyone is defeated by someone). The chances of this occurring when
-there are 21 or more voters, though, is
-`less than 1.5% <https://www.accuratedemocracy.com/l_cycles.htm>`_.
+game as everyone is defeated by someone). For one analyzed set of real-world
+elections with 21 voters or more, a cycle occurred
+`less than 1.5% of the time. <https://www.accuratedemocracy.com/l_cycles.htm>`_.
 
 
 References